jazzlover
B.E. Sergeant First Class
It Takes Pressure to Make a Diamond
Posts: 3,912
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Post by jazzlover on Jun 12, 2006 16:49:07 GMT -5
The Light of Truth
Yesterday I saw the light of truth I rejoiced, I cried, and shouted I felt warm like a shot of vermouth
Later I felt the lure of the dark Truth screamed, “Run please run!” The dark knew my name was Mark
The light of truth was in my mind The dark smiled and winked The light was stern and kind
The dark tried to caress me tight I felt weak and scared Truth just turned on more light
Truth reached my heart I fell to my knees Darkness let go In tears I asked truth “help please!”
The light of truth gave me joy Darkness glared like a jilted lover The light showed me darkness evil ploy
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Post by lusciouslois on Jun 13, 2006 9:09:20 GMT -5
nice
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jazzlover
B.E. Sergeant First Class
It Takes Pressure to Make a Diamond
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Post by jazzlover on Jun 13, 2006 10:51:41 GMT -5
Thanks
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Post by lusciouslois on Jun 13, 2006 12:48:57 GMT -5
You are welcome! I hope you put these on a disc or save these poems and writings somehow.
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Post by allaboutme2 on Jun 14, 2006 11:17:31 GMT -5
wow..that was so powerful for me. BECAUSE about 2 hours ago I just had my own revelation about this person I was seeing and the truth just hit me. Then, I read this creative piece of work and I'm just like "damn"..... Good work!
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jazzlover
B.E. Sergeant First Class
It Takes Pressure to Make a Diamond
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Post by jazzlover on Jun 14, 2006 11:49:27 GMT -5
Glad it blessed you!
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